March 10, 2010

The Epic Battle of Salt vs. Pepper


A bright full moon,
Spices float on the night wind,
Dueling salt shakers.

Not too bad, eh? Let's see you come up with a better salt shaker haiku.

FACT - besides the 5-7-5 rhythm, haikus are also supposed to include a reference to the seasons. My haiku mentioned the bright full moon, which (as I mentioned in a very educational previous blog post) is associated with autumn in Japan. Boo-yah!

1 comment:

  1. Shed by shaking hands
    Snowy white hypertension
    Sneezy ancient head


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